“Aah… this is boring,” Higure yawned whilst sprawled on one of the many rows of benches around her. She looked up at the high ceiling, where she could see colorful stained glass depicting a story like the ones you’d see in a Church.
“Weren’t you the one who said she wanted to see what one of the Basilicas of Eternal Night looked like?” Nyx retorted as she sat on her knees, her hands resting on her lap. She had her eyes closed and black lightning was faintly coiling around her body.
In front of her, a peculiar ‘totem’ was erected. A wooden black eight-branched cross, a silver skull embedded in the center, and chains held in its teeth; it was the Kind Demon’s Cross.
“Still, that’s a weird icon,” the lioness raised her voice, gazing at the cross that was big enough to make her crank her neck to observe it in full. “I never quite understood. The cross, the skull, the chains… what is that supposed to represent? It sounds silly but cryptic on sight. Mostly because it’s so confusing, honestly. What about you? Do you have an idea?”
Nyx opened one eye to glance at her before focusing on the cross. “I’m not sure either… The cross shape is probably nothing much in itself. The basic religious intent of it has existed even before Christianity. In fact, I would say that even the skull isn’t worth mentioning. After all, Eternal Night was a Life Hunter. It’s merely a simple connotation. Instead, I would say that the true crux is…”
“The chains being bitten,” a new voice suddenly joined in, and the two women looked over their shoulders to see an elderly man walk toward them from the entrance. He wore an embroidered black and white robe with the cross of Eternal Night hanging from his neck as a pendant. Both of the girls could sense the vast power he exuded.
“You are…?” Higure fixed her posture a bit while Nyx stood up.
“He’s the archbishop I mentioned last time, Lacros Hortensia,” the goddess replied. “The one who suggested me to try another perspective for my magic.”
“Ah,” the lioness exclaimed in recognition and the old man smiled.
“Hm, it seems you’ve overcome your bottleneck,” he said whilst inspecting Nyx’s lightning.
She nodded silently, her hand gathering the Aeter around her. “Yes, thank you for the advice last time. I did find my answer by asking someone who knew Eternal Night.”
“Oh?” The archbishop raised an eyebrow in curiosity. “It sounds as if you found someone other than Karaskan… am I correct in my assumption?”
Nyx smiled faintly as she dispelled her magic. “That’s a secret.”
Lacros chuckled. “I suppose I shouldn’t expect any less from the Eternal Maiden.”
“Hey, wait,” Higure spoke up. “Can you explain what you said while coming in just now?”
“Oh, that?” He smiled good-naturedly, not taking any offense to her informality. He approached the cross and placed his hand on it. “As you know, this cross you see here is a replica. One that we made based on the original. If you had seen the latter, you would have understood,” he paused and looked up at the skull.
“Even to this day, some of our clergy get scared by the real one. Don’t get me wrong; it’s not about the energy it exudes. Rather… the clattering sounds that one can hear when they have their back turned to it,” the archbishop’s smile widened. “I tried it myself. The most daunting aspect of it is that no matter how fast you look back, nothing has moved.”
The lioness fell silent for a few seconds, “And that’s part of the conclusion you arrived at I assume?”
“Yes,” he nodded. “I must say that I’ve always wondered; the chains connected to the cross are all binding it to the ground. But before that, they’re pooled within the skull’s mouth and pressed tight by the teeth. You’ve got to ask yourself; is the cross being tied to the ground, or is the skull the one locking the two together like a coacher pulling the ropes?”
“What are you implying? That this cross is self-coercing?”
The elderly man laughed lightly and waved his hand. “How about this? I will show you something so let’s turn around for a moment,” he said and distanced himself from the cross a bit before facing his back toward it. “Come on, don’t just stand there,” he added and the two women looked at each other before standing next to him.
“Now, whatever happens, do not look back,” he stated, and on cue, his aura erupted and filled the hall in an instant. Higure and Nyx shuddered as they saw black lightning, not unlike the Eternal Night Magic they were used to seeing, but with a white outline and an oddly soothing presence.
‘Certainly… that Aeter lacks the mark of the original one,’ Nyx thought. ‘That’s what they meant by mine being authentic. His is a variant; mutated to some extent. However, I can tell that even the Kind Demon himself would be proud. To reach this far without the complete form… impressive.’
As she was thinking about that, she noticed that the lightning was moving toward the cross, which they were unable to see. Then, it happened; a metallic noise resounded. It was oddly soft, but the intermittent screeches of grinding metal made her wince.
Aside from the archbishop, the two women were having a hard time resisting the urge to turn back and hopefully clear up the chills crawling up their spines.
Lacros smiled at that and eventually stopped his lightning. As he did so, the sounds stopped and the girls quickly jumped a few steps away from the cross whilst pivoting. Once they saw that the cross had not changed in the slightest, they sighed in relief.
“What the hell was that…?” Higure uttered, wiping her sweat.
“Yes, I would also like to know,” Nyx scowled. “Didn’t you say that this was a simple replica?”
The old man snorted. “I did. I merely gave it a kickstart. In this world, symbols and identity have power. Even drawing the cross on paper would have an effect if you inject the appropriate energy into it. The existential weight of Eternal Night is high enough to transform anything about him into a crude magic formation. What you just experienced was a temporary simulation of the original cross that I created by sharing some of my Aeter with the replica.”
Higure huffed. “Well, that was a bit too unsettling for my taste. Do you all really worship the person behind that cross without fear?” She asked. Despite knowing very well from Rakna that Arimane was not an evil being in any manner, what she just felt cemented one fact. That man was a monster of untold magnitudes.
“Without fear? Of course not,” Lacros retorted. “Eternal Night does not promise anything to his believers. He has no doctrines, core principles, or a sacred afterlife. If anything, he has the greatest netherworld,” he added with a chuckle. “No, lady. We do fear him. But in fear, we find respect. In respect, we find admiration. And as such, we follow. He is powerful and has reached heights that incite respect in his enemies. That is the kind of God Eternal Night is.”
“As for those…” His voice trailed as he glanced at the chains. “I like to think of them as a struggle.”
“A struggle?” Nyx reiterated in confusion.
“Yes, the idea of struggle, to be exact. It is the chains that weigh down the world. The Kind Demon is the symbol of them being shattered. When you turn your back, he devours them for you and you remain blissfully unaware. However, there are times when the skull drops the chains…”
“…and when is that?” Higure urged him on and he grinned.
“When there is something more urgent to bite of course,” he said laughingly. “If you see them being released, it means the cross is about to purge a struggle rising before them instead.”
“Uh-uh,” the lioness responded. “In short, you all follow a God whose dogma is to follow his whims and destroy whatever stands in the way of the betterment of his vision of the world,” she uttered blankly, until a smirk graced her features, her fangs in full view. “Can’t say I dislike it.”
Lacros closed his eyes with a hum. “I’m happy to hear it. I would be happy to welcome you into our ranks if you wish so. A friend of the Eternal Maiden is a friend to all of us.”
“I’ll pass,” Higure snorted. “Not that your organization doesn’t sound interesting, but all the faith that my mind could possibly produce is already directed at someone else,” she said with a sincere tone. “Love is the highest degree of faith, after all, isn’t it?”
Nyx blinked and her eyes widened slightly at the lioness’ abrupt confession. The latter gave her a glance in return and shrugged with a calm expression, not hiding for even a second who she might have been referring to.
“Hahaha, I see. I envy you; what a beautiful faith that is indeed,” Lacros said with a nod. “Treasure it. Those kinds of things must be held tight and forever preserved. No matter its end.”
“You don’t have to tell me,” Higure snickered.
The archbishop smiled and his eyes abruptly shifted somewhere else, seemingly peering through the walls of the basilica. “Oh… that’s quite interesting,” he muttered.
“Is something wrong?” Nyx asked, confused about what he was looking at. Neither she nor Higure had sensed anything warranting his sudden change of focus.
“Well, if it is wrong or not, I have no idea,” Lacros hummed. ‘An Adjudicator…? In the middle of the city and so quietly? And with quite an interesting presence next to it…’ He thought.
“Something happening outside?” Higure asked and he nodded.
“Indeed. And I’m sure you will learn of it very soon. That unique presence is telling of who it may be,” he said with a chuckle. “On this note, before we part, would you like me to tell you something else about our Basilica?”
“Yes?”
“It’s about a prophecy,” the archbishop crossed his arms behind his back. “Much like the one that announced your arrival, Eternal Maiden, there is another that describes a special individual who appears at the same time as you. Someone…” His eyes narrowed. “Very close to Eternal Night.”
Higure and Nyx stiffened and looked at each other.
“I see… so, you knew about him after all, huh?” The lioness raised an eyebrow. “I guess there’s no harm or even surprise in your organization knowing that. But… what’s that prophecy about?”
Lacros snickered softly. “A simple affair, really. The prophecies we hear by tapping into the faith we created for Eternal Night are always quite straightforward. They aren’t detailed, just like every other prophecy out there, but there’s nothing flowery about it either. Perhaps it is due in part to the Kind Demon’s personality.”
“So, hear this,” he declared and gazed at the two women. “‘The Eternal Maiden of Elysium will find herself stranded in Systemakva. Together with her, the Kind Demon’s Kin will follow. He will rise and conquer; he is your liberator and your last chance… to survive long and well.’”
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Right, I had forgotten self-reviews were a thing on this site… Well, well, what can I say? I guess I’m just gonna go through the five criteria given for a review. First of all, compared to my first book, I’m pretty confident about my writing quality. My English is certainly not advanced but it’s solid, I think. But don’t blame me for missing words or careless mistakes cuz I have the attention span of a… [insert dumb animal here]. The stability of the updates should be pretty consistent in the future if nothing goes wrong with my health. Story development, huh? I’m certainly the only one who can answer that with only two chapters in… Honestly, I’d say you can expect an extensive but linear kind of story development. That’s all I’ll say. Character design is not my forte, ngl. I can stick to the personalities I create but I sorta struggle to properly express them. But that’s just my own take on my own work, you tell me. And finally, world background. To be fair, I’m liking the general picture I have in my head right now. The least I can say is that the world will be big; very big. Might be more than I can handle even. But I’ll try. That’s it. Oh, and from experience of people answering my review with: “Is this a harem?!” I don’t know. I’m not sure. But, in all honesty, I’m probably going to get attached to the female characters so it has higher chances to happen than not. I’ll see, you’ll see. On this note, peace. ✧/ᐠ-ꞈ-ᐟ (I hope I haven’t made any spelling mistakes in this shit, I hate that)
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(I’ll paste my review from scribblehub here] Enjoyable and fantastic world building. I’m a big fan of the personality of the side characters so far, they, and by extension, the world, feel alive. Bits and pieces of comedy sprinkled in here and there that made me crack a smile or two, nice sometimes strategic fighting and engaging fight scenes make this novel an entertaining read. Highly recommend reading.
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Loved this novel so far (chapter 86), it has an intresting MC, with actually intresting side characters that are gradually being developed. The progression of the plot and characters has been great, with us learning more about the MC and the setting in general. It has avoided bad tropes, and the characters act far more like human beings than in other novels. 10/10 recommend to everyone.
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Let me tell. I have read countless novels on this site, but I would always drop them around the early or mid stages due to it being soooooooo boring. But this novel is a work of art. THE FIRST NOVEL IN 3 MONTHS I HAVE NOT DROPPED> AMAZING
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When I started reading this book I thought that author and I are brotherly souls as thats exactly something I would like to write calm but with the undercurents mc main weapon quindao, even the way story developed at the start loke snake pet… Even in later stages of the story there is some parts similar to what id like in mine mc or side characters like smithing, runemaking even the animal trinity is wery similar to mine favourite (wolf-wolf, wite tigeres- liones, eagle – luquila). Ovaral a very very satisfying story to read as it goes on the development line I would favour the most. Good quality deap characters especialy mc, nice back story and a world building that has a twmpering of two boos. RECOMENDED FOR ALL to atleast try and not quit until the end of trials
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Overall, the rate of progression is very good. MC doesn’t get super strong super quickly but it also isn’t slow. Its balanced perfectly so that after you get adjusted to a new skill of his, you are then sitting on the edge of your seat to see how he will continue to progress. Not every increase in power is large, sometimes its just one or two new auxiliary or small skills so you don’ have to worry about MC getting crazy evolutions and skills every few chapters. Not only does the MC progress steadily but the side characters too. MC is op but not to the point that its ridiculous. A lot of the reasons he is op is justified and explained when learning about his backstory, and rest you can file under MC luck, because you wouldn’t want some average joe Mc. But he is still balanced and has to struggle from time to time. He doesn’t get a bunch of skill all at once and each skill is explained in its entirety. The skills themselves are not usable straight away either, MC and the other character need to learn how to use their skills and the different ways to use them on their own, which takes time, so there are chapters where he is just getting used to a new skill are or trying out an different application for a existing one. MC also is climbing floors and gaining levels like a psycho either, if anything, anybody else at his skill level would probably climb floors faster, however that doesn’t mean MC doesn’t progress. It could be argued that he progresses more when he is not trying to climb floors then when he is. The skills and powers in the story are very unique and there are very very few clichés throughout the story. MC is also very unique in the way he thinks and his personality (both of them) and you won’t get bored of him whether your learning about his past, or watching him slaughter hundreds of monsters while thinking about what he is going to do later. The world background is very good, and there are no giant confusing info dumps. We learn just enough to know how the overall of how things work and that the world is very large, but without giving us actual details about a lot of the world until they are relevant for the story or the MC has reached a level where he would learn of it. When it comes to the writing quality it is pretty much perfect, barely any typos and the English is easy to read. When it comes to comedy, it is not overly abundent or forced and flows in with the story very well and will always make you smile from time to time. If I had do give a downside to this story, it is that it isn’t as popular as it should be and I want more chapters per week.
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well I’m enjoying how the work is going crazy mc see him without problem in becomes cruel to enemies without being a coward to dirty the most is what I hate the most mainly at the level of struggle the character design is cool i really liked the mc I also see female characters with unique characters I’m a huge fan of the MC Monster novel myself and you left it in a really cool way without him becoming a monster in the first chapter and returning to human in the third to never see his monster form again I’m also a fan and evil powers but I’m really enjoying your originality like (fireball) (fire wall) different thing different things like create a fireball that floats and shoots fireballs at the enemy for 30 seconds then disappears like that and with evil powers now it gets better still hahaha. ah and universal expansion makes the adventure even more complete with different monsters many enemies and many other races well i’m very stuck with your story here why 1. best werewolf novel I’ve ever seen 2. harem 3. beautiful girls with unique and funny characters kkk 4. mad, lunatic, cruel, decisive, and protective mc with loved ones:D 5. lots of funny and different characters 6. large universe with many other worlds and good adventure 7. oh also for having a sense of danger 8. animal companions I like that a lot from Chinese novels 9. unique and exciting world system 10. mc with unique and original ability is that; D
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Really Good book Interisting story Something Some times complicated But i Love it And now some random shit: 6tudjdijufpktpu85€%/=8__=%_%}□>□♤○>□♤○>■□☆{<{><[|5|9>5~}♤♡□<<♤{■♤●♤♤○6<[>4●♡<<[<}♤{♤{}|5□□{|86{|6
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Que novel incrível, completamente viciado. Espero que seja uma historia grande como a outra. ………………………………………….
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